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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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So strange It's something here inside to blame, That makes me act like moth to flame. An essence that was born within, That plays me like a violin. Present me with the feminine And something happens here within. My personality changes, It completely rearranges. I vibrate from hard to mellow, Like a sweet stroke on a cello. Smile and soften my attitude, Beyond my normal latitude. Like something turns a key inside. Something that seems to touch my pride. Do things I'd not normally do. It seems to me I actually coo. Of course this attitude can change, It's that, that seems to me so strange? |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Another goodie - love that line: 'Like a sweet stroke on a cello'. Great work, Seymour. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite interesting!!! Enjoyable read!! Thanks  ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn and Justbleu, Thank you for the read and comments always enjoy what you have to say. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I wonder if it's the perfume?....Great great job Mr. Tabin.....wonderfully done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toerag, I don't think it's the perfume but your close. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, this one is a keeper. Well done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Thank you much for the comment. I'll take your advice and keep it. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I think they call it "the scent of a woman" Good Work! ------------------ Julie ------------------------- ..."to thine own self be true." >William Shakespeare |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
This is wonderful, Sy. I agree with 'Deer... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Julie, You are right. Sally S, Thank you. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I've got some of that exotic aphrodisiac stuff - is that it?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
My Nan, You are loaded. *L* |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Pheromones or love bugs...*LOL* Nice one Sy ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I love this piece Seymour, It is quite soothing. Michael |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Makes scents to me... PAL ------------------ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Caroline, Michael and Paul, Thank you all for the comments and humor. Always enjoy reading your remarks. |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Seymour, Very nice. 'I vibrate from hard to mellow Like a sweet stroke on a cello.' Excellent line. Really enjoyed this a lot. Tyson |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Johnt300, Don't like to leave anyone unanswered. I thank you much for the kind touch. Have a good one. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Why of course it's good! Seymour wrote it! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, You are a living doll. *L* |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Excellent verse! ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dream Evil, Excellent from you has made my day. Thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you still got the touch |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sy,I love this. Parts of thoughts and sentences dance swiftly through my mind. Would love to make a fancier reply. But it is late in the morning for me( as I work late night shift) and I am too tired to be clever. Just need to say once again, thank you for you and your quick and witty mind. mind. marty |
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