with alll my heart and soul........to my child

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with alll my heart and soul........to my child

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 1999-09-15 03:10 PM

how will you see me,
once your beautiful eyes,
open for the first time?
will you know me right away,
or will you glance with amazement,
wondering where you are,
and if im the one who brought you here.

how will it feel,
the first time i hold you tiny hand in mine,
i can almost feel the tears now,
of joy, and love,
everything that will come from you,
will be all the happiness i will ever need.

i know that ill never want to leave you,
for an instant,
so much a part of me,
is in you,
and through your eyes,
ill see my own,
filled with all the dreams i once had,
only i wont allow yours to be broken,
never let your heart shadder,
not one single tear will fall,
without my comfort, and engcouragement,
that your better than anything,
that could ever hurt you.

im waiting with amazement,
wondering who you will be,
and will you love me,
as much as i love you?

with all my heart and soul..........to my child.

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

1 posted 1999-09-15 03:43 PM

This is so beautiful and tender. I'm sure your child will enjoy reading this when he/she grows up. Wonderful work!

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 1999-09-15 05:51 PM

Best wishes, Amber. This poem is so sweet-I echo Tara's comment.

Love,

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 1999-09-15 05:55 PM

That is a wonderful poem Amber...It is so great that you have soo much love!!

Keep following your heart....

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-09-15 06:02 PM

A lovely poem, your child will know cos it'll show to him/her everyday in every little thing you do..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

5 posted 1999-09-16 01:44 AM

i pray you all are right, and i want to thank you for your support and encouragement, throughout all my writings and emotions since ive been here. thay really are appreciated.

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