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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-09-15 01:52 PM


If I had only known
You always tried to brighten my life
To show me the silver lining in the darkest of clouds
Painted my dreams beautifully before my eyes
Bringing me to giggles when I cried
There to comfort me in the darkest of nights
Holding me so gently when I wanted to die
Never giving up when everyone else would
Understanding in that odd, peculiar, sweet sort of way
All of my silly, eccentric, strange talks and ways


Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

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Paul Allen Lupien
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 114
Ferndale,Mi.USA
1 posted 1999-09-15 02:58 PM


Keep going...This needs some kind of resolution I think...It's good...if only...
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-15 05:45 PM


Thanks!! I agree with you...but at this time I don't know the ending!!

Someday I'll know!!

Justbleu

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-09-15 06:24 PM


It needs more sure, but it's still good :

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



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