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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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If I had only known You always tried to brighten my life To show me the silver lining in the darkest of clouds Painted my dreams beautifully before my eyes Bringing me to giggles when I cried There to comfort me in the darkest of nights Holding me so gently when I wanted to die Never giving up when everyone else would Understanding in that odd, peculiar, sweet sort of way All of my silly, eccentric, strange talks and ways Justbleu  ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Keep going...This needs some kind of resolution I think...It's good...if only... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks!! I agree with you...but at this time I don't know the ending!! Someday I'll know!! Justbleu |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It needs more sure, but it's still good : ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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