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Denise
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0 posted 1999-09-02 08:34 PM


I linger there upon your shore
And long to linger...evermore
And gaze...forever...at your sea
-Such captivating majesty.

Your rolling waves crash on the rocks
And dance about your weathered docks;
Gulls swoop and soar above each crest
Inviting me to dream...to rest.

Your 'Lovely Ladies' line each street
And charm the hearts of all they meet
And bid them graciously to stay;
Abide beside the ocean spray.

I long to gaze upon your sea
-Such captivating majesty;
Upon your shore I long to stay
Forever...always...fair Cape May.



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1 posted 1999-09-02 09:53 PM


Excellent! I love your style! Let's get this back to the top!

Denise
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2 posted 1999-09-03 07:04 PM


Thank you Poet deVine. I'm glad that you liked this. It is about my most favorite spot!

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Denise

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3 posted 1999-09-03 08:51 PM


You have written about my favorite of God's creations, and I could stay at a place like this forever if destiny begged me to. Beautifully written, thanks for taking me away for the moment.

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4 posted 1999-09-03 10:15 PM


Thanks Lost Dreamer. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I don't think there is any spot on earth as lovely as the seaside. Thanks for reading and commenting!


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5 posted 1999-09-04 12:15 PM


You have described it well, D. Made me want to go visit Cape May.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


Denise
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6 posted 1999-09-04 12:20 PM


Thanks, Elizabeth! By the way, the best time to go is in late fall after the crowds go away. So peaceful!!

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Mike Pickering
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7 posted 1999-09-04 01:21 AM


I loved this one. Keep up the good work.
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8 posted 1999-09-04 01:25 AM


Thanks Mike for reading and commenting. And welcome to PIP.

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9 posted 1999-09-28 07:38 PM


HA applauds!
Denise
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10 posted 1999-09-28 08:11 PM


Thank you, HA for your kind comment!

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11 posted 1999-09-28 08:14 PM


Again Denise, wonderful, you lure me to the sea. Can't wait to go there on hols in 3 weeks. We are kindreds when it comes to the sea and it's abounds.

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~Isis~
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12 posted 1999-09-28 08:19 PM


Thank you, Isis, for reading and commenting!
It is always appreciated! I don't know what it is about the sea, but it pulls me to it!
Hopefully, one of these weekends (before it starts snowing, I hope!) I'll get there again!

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