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In The Beginning... (with thanks to Craig )
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In The Beginning... (with thanks to Craig ) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Parables and prophecies , weathered by lifes storms. All we are or will ever be , expressed in written form . Solitary souls do seek , and here-in find a peace . Setting forth in metered rhyme , what we have chosen to release . Introspective musings , at least on paper may. Open portals to hidden realms , so we may see though what they say . New formed thoughts conceptualized , dreams brought forth in ink . Shared experience benefits us all , the more clearly we may think . In troubled times , safe haven found . Never closing , open doors . Pardoning our digressions , whereas some might call us bores . Only by exploring , can we search and hope to find . Enough grist to feed the hoppers , of the mills inside our minds . Truth and understanding , are but two of what we speak . Rare indeed our poetic creed , and the grails that we seek . Yonder I will walk with thee , apart but not alone , for there in treasured company , is a place we may call home . ------------------ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
So true, all of it....:-)) HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1, You are quite the literate And your words considerate All your phrases are quite right But it rings an aweful sight. Enjoyed the poem. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent tribute to a place we all love!!! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Rainbow , Seymour , and Suthern , Thanks for your comments . This was my first attempt at acrostic poetry ( blame it on Craig ) I am posting more shortly , " Just Like a Kid With a New Toy " Thanks again ! ------------------ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...this is wonderfully written!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Awesome! What wording you used! Really awesome! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Hoot & WhtDove , Thanks for the accolades . This is definitely a "learn as you go site" , and I hope to learn as much as possible from all of you . ------------------ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent piece! You certainly have a way with words!  ------------------ Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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