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miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.

0 posted 1999-09-14 01:14 PM


My life consists of:

Confusement
Anger
Tears
Smiles

I'm confused of what I want,
I don't know my options.
Don't know where to start,
Or if you'll follow me there.

I'm angry half the time,
But only with myself.
I don't know what you want,
I don't know how to give it to you.

I cry so many tears.
Right when I think I have no more,
I feel one running down my face,
The tear of hope.

I smile only when
I turn on my screen,
I see my PIP friends,
And I know I'm wanted here.


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miriam coronado



© Copyright 1999 miriam coronado - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-09-14 02:16 PM


Miriam this was a great piece! Very touching! It's great to have a place you can feel cared for isn't it? We're glad you're here!!!
DBeth
Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110
providence,ky.42450
2 posted 1999-09-14 02:30 PM


Very nice poem Miriam.I always enjoy reading your work.Keep it up!


DBeth

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 1999-09-14 03:53 PM


Miriam,
Never fear I too am here.

Deb Lynne
Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180
Where blue skies meet blue ocean
4 posted 1999-09-14 03:57 PM


Hey California girl! Sending you lots of love and caring from NC.... and a friend!
Write me.... soon!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 1999-09-14 05:46 PM


Miriam alot of feeling in this piece, very nice. I too am here, email me anytime

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



miriam
Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
6 posted 1999-09-14 06:09 PM


thank you guys!! love you with all my little corazonsito (heart).


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 1999-09-14 06:12 PM


I too am here, so you have lots of friends.
As offered before you can email me anytime.Now smile!!!::::

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
8 posted 1999-09-14 09:17 PM


We are so glad you joined us. I think
of us like granuales of sand where
together we are like beauty of the ocean shore.


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Julie
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Today a man discovered gold and fame,
Another flew the stormy seas;
Another set an unarmed world aflame,
One found the germ of a disease.
But what high fates my path attend;
For I-today-I found a friend.
>Helen Barker Parker


Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

9 posted 1999-09-14 09:21 PM


Yes, miriam, you are truly welcome here!

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Denise

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

10 posted 1999-09-15 12:04 PM


This is a safe house, I'll agree. Glad you found PinP!
juanita
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68
Los Angeles, CA, USA
11 posted 1999-09-15 12:48 PM


Siento mucho que tu corazoncito este tan
confundido.
I am so sorry your little heart feels so
confused.
I'm here for you in either language, please
feel free to communicate.

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
12 posted 1999-09-15 12:52 PM


Words that one can relate to are the best in the world!!

I love this place too!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

miriam
Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
13 posted 1999-09-15 03:48 PM


Stop It!... You guys are making me blush!! thanks for everything. I gave each and everyone of you a hug in my dreams last night. I'll do it again tonight.
miriam

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
14 posted 1999-09-15 04:27 PM


Que corazoncito? Lo que yo veo es un corazonsote! Bienvenidos, Miriam. Estamos aqui a tu orden! Veo que tienes muchos amigos aqui....y yo soy uno!
miriam
Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
15 posted 1999-09-15 05:28 PM


muchas gracias mi amigo Balladeer. Se me hace un poco raro que tanta gente hable el espanol. Ahora me doy cuenta que aqui tengo gente de mi propia sangre latina.

miriam

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
16 posted 1999-09-15 08:09 PM


Thanks miriam, it's amazing how all these people went from being names on a screen to freinds. I love it here, it's like a family.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
17 posted 1999-09-15 09:25 PM


Miriam: A rainbow smile is here for you as well..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


miriam
Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
18 posted 1999-09-16 01:15 AM


Rainbow & Hoot...thank you.
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