Open Poetry #2 |
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Ode to a toad |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Ode to a Toad On the edge of some water weeds, Below a pillowed moon. Sits a toad on a lily pad, Croaking, a lonely croon. Exuberant he spends the hours, Through the flower of night, He bloats and croaks his melody, With overripe delight. He calls out to the ladies fair, To hear his raucous tune. To lure her close and into mate. Below a pillowed moon. He sings rebeep in constant sweep, Calling passionately. He cannot stop or stay a note, Here lies his destiny. He croaks it from the diaphragm, Over and over, here I am. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
That was fun and a very good read. Thanks for sharing. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So much wit and humor around here! Sure hope some of it rubs off on me! ![]() |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wart's it all about, Seymour? Do we just call for mates until we croak? Is our only goal to be a tadpole's dad? Have I lost my mind at last? Going to bed now. 'Night, Sy. Good poem! ![]() ------------------ My karma just ran over your dogma. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I Taught - I Toad you - It was a Frog RE-BEEP![]() [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-02-99).] |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh my! yanno, I liked this 'un, I did. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the above, REBEEP,REBEEP,REBEEP,REBEEP. |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
SMILE ... yanno, this water can get cold ... ribbit, ribbit, ribbit ... thanks SY |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Traveler, Thank you for the ribbit. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Love it. "Overripe delight" - I wish I'd written that! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you sue. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFL - Only Sy could write so adeptly about a silly little toad!! ![]() |
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