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Dom Mart
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since 1999-08-17
Posts 164
Florida

0 posted 1999-09-14 08:21 AM



We get the check after
We've consumed our final bite.
Our waiter knows that earlier
Would spoil our appetite.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-14 09:50 AM


I love these....not a wasted word amoung them, direct and to the point!!!

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 1999-09-14 11:12 PM


Cute!

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Denise

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