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The rain drop |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Rain Drop A moment's rap, a moment's tap, A moment's snap, a moment's clap, A moment's reign, a moment's wane, A moment's stain, a moment's rain. Swiftly falling through the air, Splashing o'er the earth somewhere, Making sounds of different strain, All are echoes of the rain. Striking heavy, Striking light, Like a lance, of riding knight, Charging down on old terrain, Pounding echoes of the rain. In the rhythm of the sound, Sounds the life of earths rebound. Speaking whispers and refrain, In the echoes of the rain. A moment's sound, a moment's sight, a moment's stain, a moment's light A moment's life, a moment lain, And then the echoes of the rain. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
So lovely, Seymour....an outstanding piece of poetry. I love rain even more now  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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BrightLight Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 45 |
Let there be rain to grow the grain. Let there be rain to nourish the brain. Let there be rain with some refrain. Let there be rain cause I've been prayin Let there be rain upon the arid terrain. Great job! Your poem made me think how much we need rain here, and how delightful it would be to get a good dose about now. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Keep safe, Seymour, you and yours! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, Caroline and BL, Thank you so much for the read and good wishes. Will keep in touch. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh....I do love the rain. It's presence bring comfort into my uneasy life. ------------------ "This world is not conclusion. A sequel stands beyond, Invisable as music, But positive as sound." ~Emily Dickinson |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Hoot always enjoy your comments |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's raining here too...but nothing as to what you may be getting. Take care!! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Seymour, I love this piece! I love rain! This poem, for some reason, reminded me of that song, "April Showers," from the movie, "Bambi!" The happiness of rain or something... hehehe Never mind my musings... I'm rambling... Excellent work!!! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
drip drip drop little April Showers...thank's one voice..I'll never get that out of my head now. Seymour~ This is excellent, and beautiful. Well done, as always. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sey: Oh how I do love the rain and this poem. Top shelf material here. The flow is perfect for the subject matter... well done! One can tell you put some serious work into this one. Thanks for the effort and for sharing. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I loved it! I could actually hear the rain. A storm! Great imagery! Stay safe!!!!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
~One voice~,Satiate, Andrew and WhtDove, Thank you all so much, your comments are a delight. And because of them I will sleep well tonight. |
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