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Passions Cup |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
~Passions Cup~ Touch not the center of my being fair maiden for Ye know not What great Longings lay waiting within yearning for Passions touch , And yea I say unto thee shall ye be strong Enough to drink of my cup, Know ye not that the day thou Partake of my cup drunk shall ye be all thy days. Liken unto strong wine is my Passions strength. And when drunk with my passions be thee, then shall All my desires engulf thee my Lips shall be a sweet Savor unto thy taste my eyes shall be the light of Thy world my arms shall be thy comfort in the Night as well as the day, and ye shall know my heart Within thy soul my mind shall be thy dwelling place For all the rest of thy days none other shall have the Key save thee. So again I say to thee fair maiden shall ye be the One to drink ............... Of......Passions........Cup |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
wowowowowowowowowowowow!! if you can't tell by now, I like your style. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, masterfully written. I like...looking forward to more!! ------------------ "This world is not conclusion. A sequel stands beyond, Invisable as music, But positive as sound." ~Emily Dickinson |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Haunting and very sensual!! Great job...free verse is a favorite of mine Hope to see more from you... ------------------ Helewes |
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