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Loneheart
Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92
Eastern US

0 posted 1999-09-13 07:45 PM


~Passions Cup~


Touch not the center of my being fair maiden for Ye know not
What great Longings lay waiting within yearning for
Passions touch , And yea I say unto thee shall ye be strong
Enough to drink of my cup, Know ye not that the day thou
Partake of my cup drunk shall ye be all thy days.
Liken unto strong wine is my Passions strength.
And when drunk with my passions be thee, then shall
All my desires engulf thee my Lips shall be a sweet
Savor unto thy taste my eyes shall be the light of
Thy world my arms shall be thy comfort in the
Night as well as the day, and ye shall know my heart
Within thy soul my mind shall be thy dwelling place
For all the rest of thy days none other shall have the
Key save thee.
So again I say to thee fair maiden shall ye be the
One to drink ............... Of......Passions........Cup


© Copyright 1999 Loneheart - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 1999-09-13 07:48 PM


wowowowowowowowowowowow!!
if you can't tell by now, I like your style.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-14 09:12 AM


Wow, masterfully written. I like...looking forward to more!!

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-09-14 09:35 AM


Haunting and very sensual!!
Great job...free verse is a favorite of mine
Hope to see more from you...

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Helewes

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