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DreamEvil
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0 posted 1999-09-13 07:40 PM


Dear Ladycat, I hear you are with child.
This Miracle has been revealed to me.
I can well imagine how much you've smiled.
Why you have been blessed is no mystery.

This Miracle has been revealed to me.
A more deserving soul I could not find.
Why you have been blessed is no mystery.
I have met few so deserving and kind.

A more deserving soul I could not find.
Your Light shines brighter than any other.
I have met few so deserving and kind.
Your child could not have a better mother.

Your Light shines brighter than any other.
The odds you beat, being filled with new life.
Your child could not have a better mother.
Darquewing could not hope for a better wife.

The odds you beat, being filled with new life.
I know you've longed for a baby to hold.
Darquewing could not hope for a better wife.
My friend, your future is your own to mold.

I know you've longed for a baby to hold.
I can well imagine how much you've smiled.
My friend, your future is your own to mold.
Dear Ladycat, I hear you are with child.


©1999 DreamEvil


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1 posted 1999-09-13 07:46 PM


I'm sure Ladycat will love this pantoum, Dream! It's very lovely.

P.S. Congrats Ladycat!!!

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Tara Simms
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2 posted 1999-09-13 07:51 PM


Congrats, LadyCat. Dream, what a lovely tribute.
Elizabeth
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3 posted 1999-09-13 08:09 PM


It's beautiful Dream. Once again congrats to Lady and Darquewing!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


Poet deVine
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4 posted 1999-09-13 09:39 PM


Excellent pantoum! It was sweet of you to write this for them DE!

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5 posted 1999-09-14 03:03 AM


Well done! Thoughts shared by us all.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Dark Angel
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6 posted 1999-09-14 03:20 AM


Soul-Brother this is beautiful. well done
Ladycat Congratulations

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Alicat
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7 posted 1999-09-14 07:41 AM


Beautiful homage to an event which will literally save her life. Thank you DE for taking the time to create such a marvelous pantoum. Quite possible this will make up for the great anger she felt upon reading your prose answer to her question.

Alicat

DreamEvil
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8 posted 1999-09-14 08:28 AM


I felt this the least I could do to not only congratulate the parents-to-be but to express my own joy at the news.

Alicat, I am truly sorry Cat is angry after reading my essay. As I understood her request, she asked me to explain racism not to give my own opinion of it. I have since added a paragraph making my own opinions of it clear.

Cat, I'm sorry for any misunderstandings or misinterpretations that have arisen from my essay. I only intended to explain racism from all sides as it affects all races.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©



Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 1999-09-14 08:30 AM


DreamEvil,
Beautiful poem and my congrats to Ladycat.
I still have a drawing that Darquewing sent to a poem of mine called Caitlin. My best to both of them.

JennyLee
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10 posted 1999-09-14 10:00 AM


What a lovely way to wish a friend blessings.
How fortunate to have a friend like you...

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11 posted 1999-09-15 05:52 AM


I finally found the piece that everyone raved about.. I don't know what to say other than I cryed.. I cryed alot and I know it wasn't just the hormones.. Noone has ever been so wonderful as to write a piece to me during such a miracle as this.. I can't thank you enough.. You truely have me speechless.. Thank you all for the love and caring that you have showed me during such a rough time in my life and Thank You DE for being there for me..

Ali, as far as the piece goes if I hate something that much I will tell the person myself.. I am a big girl and I can write too..

Love,
Lady

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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.



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