Open Poetry #2 |
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Ladycat's Miracle |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This Miracle has been revealed to me. I can well imagine how much you've smiled. Why you have been blessed is no mystery. This Miracle has been revealed to me. A more deserving soul I could not find. Why you have been blessed is no mystery. I have met few so deserving and kind. A more deserving soul I could not find. Your Light shines brighter than any other. I have met few so deserving and kind. Your child could not have a better mother. Your Light shines brighter than any other. The odds you beat, being filled with new life. Your child could not have a better mother. Darquewing could not hope for a better wife. The odds you beat, being filled with new life. I know you've longed for a baby to hold. Darquewing could not hope for a better wife. My friend, your future is your own to mold. I know you've longed for a baby to hold. I can well imagine how much you've smiled. My friend, your future is your own to mold. Dear Ladycat, I hear you are with child. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I'm sure Ladycat will love this pantoum, Dream! It's very lovely. ![]() P.S. Congrats Ladycat!!! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Congrats, LadyCat. Dream, what a lovely tribute. |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It's beautiful Dream. Once again congrats to Lady and Darquewing! ![]() ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent pantoum! It was sweet of you to write this for them DE! ![]() |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well done! Thoughts shared by us all. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-Brother this is beautiful. well done ![]() Ladycat Congratulations ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Beautiful homage to an event which will literally save her life. Thank you DE for taking the time to create such a marvelous pantoum. Quite possible this will make up for the great anger she felt upon reading your prose answer to her question. Alicat |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I felt this the least I could do to not only congratulate the parents-to-be but to express my own joy at the news. Alicat, I am truly sorry Cat is angry after reading my essay. As I understood her request, she asked me to explain racism not to give my own opinion of it. I have since added a paragraph making my own opinions of it clear. Cat, I'm sorry for any misunderstandings or misinterpretations that have arisen from my essay. I only intended to explain racism from all sides as it affects all races. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DreamEvil, Beautiful poem and my congrats to Ladycat. I still have a drawing that Darquewing sent to a poem of mine called Caitlin. My best to both of them. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
What a lovely way to wish a friend blessings. How fortunate to have a friend like you... ------------------ Helewes |
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Ladycat![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
I finally found the piece that everyone raved about.. I don't know what to say other than I cryed.. I cryed alot and I know it wasn't just the hormones.. Noone has ever been so wonderful as to write a piece to me during such a miracle as this.. I can't thank you enough.. You truely have me speechless.. Thank you all for the love and caring that you have showed me during such a rough time in my life and Thank You DE for being there for me.. Ali, as far as the piece goes if I hate something that much I will tell the person myself.. I am a big girl and I can write too.. Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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