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BrightLight
Junior Member

since 1999-09-07

Posts 45

0 posted 1999-09-13 06:06 PM

Carnations

Multicolored carnations
together in a bunch.
Creating sunshine
huddled in a crunch.
Fostering happiness
laughter filling the air.
Touching conversation,
look at your beautiful hair.
Linking minds
meeting in reality,
forming a bond
through personality.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 1999-09-13 06:11 PM

It has a very nice flow, BrightLight. I love flower poems, and the way this one is symbolic of the relationship between you and your Someone!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 09-13-99).]

pandora
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 184

2 posted 1999-09-13 07:22 PM

A bond of personality! Isn't it wonderful when that happens? I like the thoughts and feelings this poem represents.

-pan

BrightLight
Junior Member

since 1999-09-07

Posts 45

3 posted 1999-09-13 10:38 PM

Elizabeth
Thanks for your response, this was a poem about a group of people that came together to meet for a first time. A delightful time was had by all.

pandora
Thanks to you also, and yes it is wonderful when personality's bond together, especially when their minds are so colorfully related.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-09-14 08:17 AM

Brightlight,
The symbolism of the poem is well taken. Good job enjoyed the poem.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-09-14 09:47 AM

Very nice flow to this one

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

6 posted 1999-09-14 09:50 AM

I like this very much.
Carnations are great flowers to write
about..
Simple and straight forward..
Thanks for sharing :~)

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Helewes

BrightLight
Junior Member

since 1999-09-07

Posts 45

7 posted 1999-09-14 06:01 PM

Seymour, Hoot, & Jenny, I thank you all kindly for your replies.

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