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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-13 01:09 PM


this heart breaks you nothing
leaves you with darker light
by the power
of the might
can we all scream life tonight
chalk it up to fate
another memory of hate
back in the hole
we are too slow
be aware what your making from me
we sink to the heavens
all i wanted to see
was you breath..
just breath..
in me




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roxane
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
1 posted 1999-09-13 01:11 PM


THIS IS SO GOOD....honestly. I really think that all of your poems are so good. We really must talk sometime.

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"Come night, come darkness, for you cannot come too soon or stay too long in such a place as this." Charles Dickens


roxane


The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A
2 posted 1999-09-13 01:45 PM


sure do you have icq or aol im or something?
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