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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-09-13 04:05 AM

Though we've only met
once my dear,
I want to make
perfectly clear
my intentions.
I really
can only say
that soon perhaps
one day,
you'll enjoy
my attentions.

Until there comes
such a time,
I fear
I'll be writing
my rhyme
inclusively
for you.

To your ears
from my lips
will meander
and trip
words
that paint
me anew.

Should one day
you truly desire
more
than the passionless fire
he brings,
then I would count
as a pleasure
your bountiful
treasured offerings.

About them,
you know
I've heard
many a word,
but counted
as absurd
the measure
of your ability.
Before I even
decided to start
I decided
the rumors
were part
of a very sad trend
to senility.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-09-13 04:11 AM

Wow... How did I get so lucky to know you? hehehe My favorite part of this is "to your ears from my lips/will meander and trip/words that paint me anew..." I love that part...

Thank you so much!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

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JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-09-13 09:56 AM

"Should one day you truly desire more"
Thats my favorite line!!
I relate so to this....
More!!!!

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Helewes

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-09-13 10:45 AM

DreamEvil,
Your a devil of a poet. I enjoy all your things. Keep writing and stay well.

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 1999-09-13 11:19 PM

Now this I like, you should "muse" more often...

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-09-14 02:30 AM

Well done, keep them coming!!!:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

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