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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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NM

0 posted 1999-09-02 12:53 PM


do you believe in love at first sight?

I do not know the exact day,
nor the time,
was it cloudy or sunny, I do not know,
small things like that do not come to mind
but I will never forget the moment I first saw you,
you have never left my mind again,
I could have walked straight into your arms
never having been anywhere else.
Love at first sight ?
---why then did I look down, pretending,
trying to tell myself that this couldn't be?
But your eyes were a connection
straight into my soul,
your hands, a caress that loved me without words,
and even before I kissed your sweet lips
and felt safety in your embrace,
I knew this passion would not be denied.
I opened my very soul to you
and in spite of all my weaknesses,
you reach out to me with your heart,
yes, I do believe

© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston
1 posted 1999-09-02 12:55 PM


ohh I have felt this feeling. Wonderful job putting it into words.
suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
2 posted 1999-09-02 12:58 PM


Another refugee straggles in... *G* Welcome... and good poem!
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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United Kingdom
3 posted 1999-09-02 02:17 PM


Hiya refugee...*g*...ooops

HUGS

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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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Coastal Texas
4 posted 1999-09-02 02:26 PM


Oh Yeah....I believe in love at first site, and love it when it happens.

Alicat

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
5 posted 1999-09-02 03:09 PM


Yanno?...I believe in love at first site of them legs granny!!!!.......Geesch..I'm gettin' hungry?...I just don't understand it?
Hi ya lovey....you sexy thang you...how ya been?

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
6 posted 1999-09-02 03:14 PM


*with a great big smile* she says thanks for the nice welcome, and I like it here already, feels like home

good to see you all here too!

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-02-99).]

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 1999-09-02 04:04 PM


yes,I too believe in love at first sight...You captured with your words so beautifully what I think alot of us have felt before....thank you for sharing

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
8 posted 1999-09-02 08:52 PM


Welcome to the family! Lovely poem...you've put into words a phenomenon quite rare! Lust at first site is usually confused with love at first site though......especially during football season when the camera pans to the Dallas Cowboy cheerleaders!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 1999-09-02 10:04 PM


Iloveit
I love it.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
10 posted 1999-09-06 02:50 AM


This is great!! I loved it!! I do believe in love at first sight!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
11 posted 1999-09-06 07:54 AM


Very nice poem indeed.....
Now..

Could all the refugees kindly stand up to be recognized - and show their green cards? You'll be needing blue ones here instead...

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