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Sweet Inspiration |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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My sweet inspiration elusive fragile merely a drop of moisture upon those great seas of talent heaving swells of finest thought while my waves lap gently at the shore unnoticed unclaimed Voices of words screech like gulls soaring above the world inspiring minds with the need to fly while my words trickle gently like pebbles from a heedless hand Yet if on the shores of poetry one small pebble is held close to a single heart and one touch of sweet inspiration I have made then a simple treasure is caught forever under those echoes of gulls and a drop of ocean water becomes a jewel 10.9.99 ------------------ 'Only the shallow know themselves.' Oscar Wilde. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
excellent Severn.....wonderfully written ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful Severn, I feel quite the same. ------------------ "The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin |
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wordweaver Junior Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 25south carolina |
great piece of art from a true craftsman. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is beautiful! I love the idea that your poetry is a pebble on the shore of poetry! Great imagery! |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Top notch Severn. very, very good words, where do you get your inspiration from... |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is a jewel, for sure Severn. I treasure reading your work, it is so finely done  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another jewel, indeed! ------------------ Denise |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Ah lass, your words hardly "trickle by" this heart. You have more than once inspired me, so watch as the drop of water, turns into a sparkling jewel. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Thanks so much to everyone! Your support is very much appreciated - we're all jewels here on our own shore of poetry. U K hero - I'm not sure actually, it just kind of comes from nowhere Chris - same goes... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love the picture you make in my mind!!! Poetry is very inspirational!! Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Let me repeat! You are the Picasso of poetry! When u said... I have made then a simple treasure is caught forever under those echoes of gulls and a drop of ocean water becomes a jewel I was bewildered by all those tiny, sharp pieces you can fit together so deftly. Just describing the ocean water as a jewel makes me think of the sun shining on the water. Loved this one, friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this is beautiful |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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