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He Has My Heart
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He Has My Heart |
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Buzzygirl Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 42St. Paul, MN USA |
HE HAS MY HEART From a beginning near a waterfall Near the rocks and flowers, saw born some spark whose light's grown stronger, increasing by night and morn. Coming together and staying there Is a fortune I've not yet known; For each hour spent rapt in your passion, I spend twenty-five alone. How nights find me in this predicament fevered thoughts laced with desire Patience is of little consequence; And no quenching of this fire. There is no tenderness in waking like this: Conciousness comes crashing upon the shore You're not here-- again-- and I'm painfully aware Of a steady silence-- and nothing more I dream of the morrow, when your gentle light's No longer half-hidden from my eye- as fair as a star, the only one That's shining in the sky. -- August 1999 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! I love your style! Very lovely, indeed!  ------------------ Denise |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Wow...this one brings back a familiar ache. You write very well. I'm looking forward to reading your other works. Welcome! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You have a way with words that touches me. Great job!  |
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