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Your Existence (repost)

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 1999-09-11 09:38 PM

Your Existence

You were my Love
Your Love made me high
It kept me young
And made me wanna fly
Over the great Oceans and Seas
To come and get you

I believed in Love
And in Dreams
Now your Love has died
And mine is dying
God, How we tried
To keep it going

Oh! How I soared over Mountains
And layed upon a Cloud
I found wonderful You
I was so proud
To have you in my life
And maybe one day
As my Wife

Never did I hear or feel you breathe
To really know…….
Your existence

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

HCwildchild
Member

since 1999-09-03

Posts 55
Pennsylvania,USA

1 posted 1999-09-11 09:45 PM

I thought this was very well done, keep up the good work.

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Heather C.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-09-11 09:54 PM

Very well done D.A. It's sad...but loves always are. Very nice!

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

3 posted 1999-09-11 09:57 PM

Poignant piece, Dark...I can relate well to this. I especially love the last stanza.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 1999-09-11 10:08 PM

HCwildchild, WhtDove and Caroline thank you for your lovely comments

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

5 posted 1999-09-15 02:24 AM

That was lovely!!! Yet seemingly sad!!
I liked it very much!!

Thanks again!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 1999-09-15 02:49 AM

Thank you Justbleu

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

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