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Oh, Shout My Soul
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Oh, Shout My Soul |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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Go forth my soul and spread the word Of His great grace; of second birth; Decreed for all; so few have heard So shout my soul throughout the earth. Longs so each soul for joy sublime; Opines each heart for peace divine; Viewed, lo, by some as wasted time; Expressed for all - His grand design. ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done Beth...flawless in it's rhthym and rhyme. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Denise, Beautifully done. I have goose bumps. I couldn't help but to feel HIS spirit.  ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Today a man discovered gold and fame, Another flew the stormy seas; Another set an unarmed world aflame, One found the germ of a disease. But what high fates my path attend; For I-today-I found a friend. >Helen Barker Parker |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh Denise This is very beautiful...I absolutely love this piece....in my favorite file this goes..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hoot, Julie and Pepper, Thanks to you for your reading and commenting. I'm glad that you liked it! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your brilliance continues to be displayed, good friend. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Why thank you, kind sir, but let's give credit where credit is due! CRAIG STARTED IT!!!  ------------------ Denise |
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HCwildchild Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 55Pennsylvania,USA |
Very nicely done I really liked this one. Keep up the good work ------------------ Heather C. |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
I didn’t start it! It was popular in the fourth century, I’m 30 something, not 1630 something !! This is one of the better examples though. ------------------ Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Heather, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ------------------ Denise |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well, thank you too, Craig! BTW you're quite young to be so talented! ------------------ Denise |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
HA applauds! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, HA, for reading and commenting! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
An excellent piece of poetry...true to form, flawless in it's rhythm and rhyme..well done!! ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow, thank you Hoot for your kind comments. ------------------ Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Terrific, wonderful and beautiful! Need I say more? Loved it Denise.. ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denice, So I liked it to. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Isis, and Seymour, thank you so much! ------------------ Denise |
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