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Too much pain
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Too much pain |
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Sherri_baby New Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 3 |
Last night I tryed to take my life I lost my blade so I found a knife I saw on tv that once u did u'd die I just failed something else and started to cry Only a little blood came out of my vein I wanted it to be a lot so I could end this pain I got mad again and took some pills I figured I had taken enough to kill When I woke up in the morning I was dissapointed more It was like I wanted to go to hell but I couldn't find the door Maybe yesterday wasn't meant to be the end for me Maybe, just maybe, it wasn't meant to be. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very tragic piece, well written. (hope it's not autobiographical) ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tragic, very tragic....there are much better ways to deal with things than this way. If this is based on a true experience Sherri, please e-mail me. I'd like to at least be there for a sounding board. I've been through a great deal in my life, maybe I could help. Hugs Ruth ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sherri I ditto hoot..if this is about you, then feel free to email or talk to me as well...sometimes you have to go through it to understand it.. Big hugs sweetheart ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
The only way OUT of the pain, is to work your way THROUGH it. Keep writing, it's great therapy! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I agree with all the above!!!!!! Channel into your writing and know that you can email any of us at anytime to talk. I think any one of us would be there for you happily! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Everything they have said above is true...we are all here for you if you need to talk!! Writing is very good therepy...so keep it up!! I want to read more from you!! Welcome!!  ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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MissQ Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 12Clarksdale, MS 38614 |
As I read this it broke my heart as it reminded me of a dark time in my past...it also cemented the fact that life is good and inner strength is always more than you think it is... |
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