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Just close your eyes...
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Just close you eyes Our sight is limited in measure Get closer than skin And look for true pleasure Above the clouds Upon the moonlight street Not only hands But dreams will meet Our minds will touch And lose control Through time and space Our souls will whirl Into the silence of the night And rocking in a lazy motion The river of our love Will find an endless ocean And there Entangled in the summer heat Not only hands But dreams will meet Just close your eyes... ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is absolutely beautiful, Master. But that is no surprise! ------------------ Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like your line "The river of our love Will find an endless ocean" Beautiful! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
yes...very beautiful indeed..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
*Blushing* Thanks everyone! ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
I'm becoming a big fan of yours! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I have that effect on smart people *S* ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You are gifted! Very touching piece you've written. I enjoyed it...gotta go, got my eyes closed.. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks, looking forward to meeting you in my dream, closing my eyes... |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Master, I'm impressed! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow..........now where are those sleeping pills, wait for me, I'll find them here in a minute. Oh, there they are, yes, okay, should be there shortly...LOL Okay, seriously, this was a beautiful and touching piece. I loved these lines "Not only hands But dreams will meet Our minds will touch And lose control" The meeting of the minds, the meld between that which is real and that which is not...wow, what a way to express it. Wonderfully done!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks hoot and I'll see you in my dreams. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Absolutely beautiful, passionate and well written. I wish my hubby could speak or write like that...: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my, did someone forget to turn on the air conditioning in here  ------------------ "The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I think the sandman just intercepted my dreams...*g* Hugs ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
wow, thanks you guys! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wait for me....just getting my teddy bear!! Very nice!!!! Justbleu ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Join in, hurry, I'm getting sleepy.... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Love the cyclic-ness of it! Sometimes it's hard to wake from dreams, isn't it. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I know it was hard this morning! Thank Severn |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so romantic! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
romantic indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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