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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Travel Intrigue The intrigue of pictorials, Cinderella attire, Offered in subliminal form, Sets desire on fire. Transference lulls a misty sleep. Moonlit figures dance ballet. Tittering winks and champagne drink, Lures you into interplay. Veiled within surreptitiousness, Flirtatious syrupy water. Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp, Makes for a heady mortar. Vivacious waiting elegance. The promise of love, so sweet, Of page on page of dream on dream, Harvesting your thoughts' complete. To guest or not to test the scheme? That is the question of the theme. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Decisions, decisions!! Very well done! (as usual!)  ------------------ Denise |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Bravo ... sorry that my responses are getting repetitive ... just in awe ... Sy,if I wasn't persistent I might quit trying to write after reading something as wonderful as this ... I'll just keep working on it ...if you keep up with this type of inspiration ... thanks again. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
dsnyder and traveler, I enjoyed your comments it is the pay of my soul. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I too hate to sound repetitive...but WOW Sy (sigh),you're the greatest...you just keep on getting better and better....always enjoy ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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