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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-09-02 09:53 AM


Travel Intrigue

The intrigue of pictorials,
Cinderella attire,
Offered in subliminal form,
Sets desire on fire.

Transference lulls a misty sleep.
Moonlit figures dance ballet.
Tittering winks and champagne drink,
Lures you into interplay.

Veiled within surreptitiousness,
Flirtatious syrupy water.
Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp,
Makes for a heady mortar.

Vivacious waiting elegance.
The promise of love, so sweet,
Of page on page of dream on dream,
Harvesting your thoughts' complete.

To guest or not to test the scheme?
That is the question of the theme.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-02 10:44 AM


Decisions, decisions!! Very well done!

(as usual!)

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Denise

traveler
Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119

2 posted 1999-09-02 12:32 PM


Bravo ... sorry that my responses are getting repetitive ... just in awe ... Sy,if I wasn't persistent I might quit trying to write after reading something as wonderful as this ... I'll just keep working on it ...if you keep up with this type of inspiration ... thanks again.
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 1999-09-02 06:49 PM


dsnyder and traveler,
I enjoyed your comments it is the pay of my soul.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 1999-09-04 09:38 AM


I too hate to sound repetitive...but WOW Sy (sigh),you're the greatest...you just keep on getting better and better....always enjoy

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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