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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA 
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I long to look into those diamond dusted eyes And search for a heart Which within I long to spy And see your diamond dusted self who seems so much more beauteous than any time before Yet, before you were no less You speak with angelic prose You weep diamond dusted tears You reap supernatural riches You overcome diamond dusted fears I am reminded of a time when you were oh so very mine A precious diamond in the rough Yet, now you are covered in a diamond dust [This message has been edited by jfreak (edited 09-10-99).] [This message has been edited by jfreak (edited 09-10-99).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Jfreak, this was really good! I have a question that's been naggin me bout your name. I know a band named DC Talk, Jesus Freak album. Anything to do with that?? |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Beautifully written. I especially liked the last lines. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
WhtDov, That is one of my all time fav albums. I am huge into Christian music. I have over 200 cds all Christian. I have almost the whole collection of DCtalk with exception to their first two albums. So yes it has something to do with that album. I just think that album was a pivotal point in Christianity in America when it came out. I think it totally challenged young people to be Jesus Freaks. Ever since then it has been with me. My computer name is Jfreak, my nickname is Moses, my real name is Brandon. All are powerful names and I will answer to them all. JESUS IS MY LORD AND KING AND I AM A FREAK FO HIM. I AM A FREAK 4 LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Julie, thanx for the comment. I wrote this for my exgirlfriend who has become a very dear friend. She was my diamond in the rough and I still love her very dearly, not romantically but personnally. We talked today for the first time since June and she just inspired me to write. She always has. Jfreak |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well Brandon, I am really glad to hear that you live for JESUS!! The only way to live! I listen to that CD too! Many favorites, among them Rich Mullins, God rest his soul! We will have to talk sometime. Can't say I have that many CD's but am working on it. I read Josh 1:8. Thank you! God Bless ya buddy!!!! |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
God bless you to dove. J |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Well written..  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
JFreak, I loved it,very well written I too loved the last few lines------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
My computer is going wacky too! Sorry!------------------ Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 09-10-99).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, Brandon. It has a romantic quality and a friendship quality! I too especially liked the last two lines! And keep lifting Him up! ------------------ Denise |
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