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miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

0 posted 1999-09-10 01:54 PM

What's the point of treating me right
And loving me for years,
If at the end I live in fright
I can't control the tears?

I thought for years your love was true
You called it "from the heart",
I did whatever i could do
So that we wouldn't fall apart.

You said you were sorry
But what does that mean?
My heart didn't know no worries
Until you came to stay with me.

I know that you miss me,
And I won't lie...i do to.
Why can't you see that what you did
Broke my heart in two?

I wish you all goodness,
In everything you do.
Our love was such a bless,
But now I walk the path without you.

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miriam coronado

Mona Lisa
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 100
Halifax, Nova Scotia

1 posted 1999-09-10 02:36 PM

This rings so true. It begs the question, if love is so wonderful, then why does it hurt so much?

Nice work.

Crimson Rogue
Junior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 21

2 posted 1999-09-10 03:18 PM

Good poem, but I can't help but wonder if it's me that you're walking alone from. Well done.

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

3 posted 1999-09-10 05:08 PM

Miriam, I can relate to this poem. You
inspired me to write one in my own version.
I'll be posting it soon. Good Work.

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Julie
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.
Marianne Williamson

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 1999-09-10 08:19 PM

Miriam, this is a good poem, I loved it, I can relate to this. thanks for sharing

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-09-10 10:28 PM

Very well done Miriam. Sometimes love hurts, it's true. Sometimes, it's just not meant to be! You have captured the pain very well indeed!

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Denise

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

6 posted 1999-09-11 06:32 PM

thank you all for reading and for the good comments.
Crimson...if you think this poem is for you then it's because in your heart you know what you've done to me. I personally believe that if your heart wouldn't feel so guilty, the thought of this poem being for you wouldn't even pass your mind. You decide if this poem is for you or not.

miriam

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

7 posted 1999-09-16 01:11 AM

I believe almost anyone can relate to this!!
I certainly can!! Nice writing!!

Thanks again...

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-04-23 01:49 PM

this aches

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2007-11-11 12:19 PM

sad, but true

ARCTIC WIND

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