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DBeth
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 110
providence,ky.42450

0 posted 1999-09-10 10:56 AM

When the time comes to say goodbye,and all is said and done,who is left to stand and cry? Am I the only one?

Who will help to ease the pain,the hurt so deep within? Will I be alone for good? Or will I have a friend?

My questions will not be answered,but as time goes on I'll see,the one I loved so much is standing next to me.

Then I'll remember how it was, when I held you close to my heart.
With that warm feeling etched in my mind,your love will never part.

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[This message has been edited by DBeth (edited 09-16-99).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-09-10 04:58 PM

Dbeth again a wonderful piece...but the poet in me wants to see this in a different format. Definately a beautiful piece.

When the time comes to say goodbye,
and all is said and done,
who is left to stand and cry?
Am I the only one?
Who will help to ease the pain,
the hurt so deep within?
Will I be alone for good?
Or will I have a friend?
My questions will not be answered,
but as time goes on I'll see,
the one I loved so much
is standing next to me.
Then I'll remember how it was,
when you held me close to your heart.
With that feeling etched in my mind,
your love will never part.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

DBeth
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 110
providence,ky.42450

2 posted 1999-09-11 11:30 AM

Thanks Hoot! I haven't yet figured out formating.I'll just keep practicing. HUGS DBeth

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Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-09-11 01:34 PM

Yes, I agree with Hoot about the formating and the beauty of this piece!

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Denise

DBeth
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 110
providence,ky.42450

4 posted 1999-09-11 06:00 PM

Thanks Denise.I have no clue about formating.I just think of something and write it down.Hugs to you DBeth

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