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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
so devoid of compassion and pity. I'm a parasite that's needing a host, a demonic child born of the city. I have become callous and cold-hearted, by hurting a Lady I truly love. I think now the Lady has departed, that she's not, I pray to the Lord above. I love her and have the scars to prove it, twisted bits of tissue clogging my veins. She's the only one who can remove it, swallowed pride is far outweighed by the gains. I ignored her pain to brood on my own, becoming in the end what I despise. I pray I have not turned her heart to stone, with all my dwelling on mispoken lies. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, this is sad dream |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Yes it is. The hardest thing about poetry, I think, is having to accept that the words spoken are often fiction, when you so want them to be true. I hope, Dreamevil, if these words are true, you tell the lady how you feel, before she slips away, like so many others have. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
This is sad my brother.. *hugs* but its nicely written ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I am at a loss for words here. I think we are much harder on ourselves than others are. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
No need for regrets... You have no debts of which you owe to me. I'm sorry too... I haven't left you, I love you too greatly. So put on a smile and after awhile, it all will seem like a dream. A bad one, I'd say, I don't wish to replay... I might come apart at the seams. There's no need for guilt, causing smiles to wilt, when this a day anew... Let's put this in the past so our love can last, 'Cause baby, I forgive you!  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Sweet relief!!! Seems my cause for regret has been lifted. ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DreamEvil, I'd say lifted and siffed. And by now baked into an angel cake. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
We need no greater example than this to show how special this place really is. ------------------ My karma just ran over your dogma. |
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