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Coping, Coping
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Coping, Coping |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Coping, Coping Oh, little ray of sunshine, little ray of hope shine down upon me now, allow me now to cope. Oh little ray, little ray, would warmth and blessings fall when I think of the darkness, in my soul and all. I was once a ray of sunshine, I made each day complete I kept giving and giving more, making each day replete until the day it ended, and my sunshine was no more oh, little ray of sunshine, come knocking at my door. I don’t think I can tell you how the feelings of love are gone, all I know is my ray of sunshine has been out far, far too long; the darkness envelopes me, the fear, the bleak, the chill ~ will there ever be sun again? I don’t think so, but still, there is the very slightest of glimmering hope I can feel somewhere hiding within the very depth of me, it’s real. Oh little ray of sunshine, littlest ray of shining hope shine upon this poor soul now, allow it ever to cope. 9 September, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice Sunshine. Full of emotion,depair and hope! Well done!  ------------------ Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Denise! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sunshine...I can feel the heartache of this one...keep that ray of hope.... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
You are so special Sunshine. I printed this piece as I found myself wiping a tear. Beautifully done! I really needed this today. I hope it gave you a BIG lift to share it. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hard to believe how well done this one really is. You put it all together here. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sunshine this is just packed with feeling! Very well done. I hope that ray of sunshine comes back soon! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all! Don't worry...sometimes we post fiction, you know! My "ray" is most always out and about... so grow, everyone! |
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