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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Delightful Evening He designed your evening welcoming familiar faces as music set the mood. The decorated appetizer tray consisted of delightful treats for hungry palettes. His enhanced salad prepared with garden treasures tossed pleasantly together. The carefully crafted main course with tender cuts of meat melted like candy upon our tongues. The sinful chocolate souffle he presented at midnight iced the evening with sheer delight. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
You must be a chef...I cook for a living though prefer catering to line cooking and I really like this poem of yours. ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Now I'm hungry...smiles. Actually, the imagery in this was nice. It spoke of food, but so much more too. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Rubba dub dub, here comes the grub!  Sounds like a wonderful meal. Ya know, I could read this one of two ways... Am I just being a bad person, or what? Again, a very fine read and lunch is two hours away. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
WildChild: Far from a chef am I, unless burnt cuisine is your pleasure. Thanks for reading glad you liked it. Hoot: Thank-you, it's funny how you can write something one way, yet not see all it has to offer till someone else reads it. Andrew: What shall I do with you? You have me curious as to what your thinking here, it is a purely innocent food poem as far as I know. Care to enlighten me, as to your visions. Thanks for reading, and responding. You made me laugh once again by bringing in the grub.I guess I should be glad it was not a spider, or centipede, just a slimy, slithery grub. ------------------ Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds like the man has pleased the woman with gastronomic delights. Nice picture. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Dreamer: I'm going to plead the 5th because this just isn't the forum for those caveman thoughts. Lets just say that the intimate side of the bed sheets can make for a wonderful buffet.  |
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