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redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
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Franklin, TN

0 posted 1999-09-09 07:49 AM


Into the light
> is where you brought me
> out of the darkness
> that was my home
>
> Into the sun
> you shone all around me
> & I closed my eyes
> and now I know
>
> I dont have to hide
> from day or night
> cause you alone
> brought me into the light


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 1999-09-09 08:31 AM


redwriter1,
Nicely done and may the light continue to shine on you.

moonmoon
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 277
TX , USA
2 posted 1999-09-09 09:02 AM



Yes, good job redwriter..I am so glad you found that perpetually shining light of your life..

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
3 posted 1999-09-09 09:28 AM


Very nice! It's a happy day when you can feel like that! Hope it stays with you forever!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-09-09 10:24 AM


Few words, but yet they speak in volumes...nicely done!!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
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Franklin, TN
5 posted 1999-09-09 01:31 PM


Thank you, I know it's short. but that's really all I wanted to say (smile)
Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-09-09 04:25 PM


Sometime it just doesn't take a lot of words to do that.....and you did it very well
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