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Open Poetry #2

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pjtavison
New Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 2
Morenci, AZ, USA

0 posted 1999-09-09 03:47 AM

Where are you?
Cast about in this torrent.

I am adrift.
Without rudder without direction.

I see not.
Clouds of doubt surround me.

Cold, angry, lost.
No mercy in a merciless void.

I am succumbing.
An abyss of unknown fathoms.

Behold a star!

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 1999-09-09 04:04 AM

Welcome to Passions. I like this one. I suspect everyone feels like this at some point in thier life. Thank you for posting...keep up the good work.

INclan

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-09-09 09:45 AM

Doubt, how it seems to cloud our view! I can relate to this! Well done! WELCOME!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-09 10:23 AM

Wow....I liked, I liked!! Very nicely done...I like the way your entire perspective (as well as your readers) changed with just two words...wonderfully done. Welcome...I will be looking for more indeed.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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