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Iloveit
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0 posted 1999-09-08 10:04 AM


faded flowers

do you remember
when you said I was the light of your life
and I was the one who filled your arms
with delight?

do you remember our kisses,
and how I ran my fingers through
your hair, and memorized every inch
of you with my touch?

do you remember when you tucked
flowers behind my ears
and we laughed and ran until we fell
and made love in the grass?

do you remember when we were one,
our eyes locked together in desire,
no other would suffice, and you
just could not get enough of me?

do you rememember my touch,
one time lover of mine, because
I am finally starting to not remember
yours....

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©1999 Iloveit

© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-09-08 10:21 AM


The last verse makes me smile... way to go, O&O!!! Hurray for amnesia! *G*
Iloveit
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2 posted 1999-09-08 10:32 AM


good to see you girl, and hey I love that,
"hurray for amnesia" shoulda been the title lol

big hugs

JTF
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3 posted 1999-09-08 11:38 AM


Great job Foxy Granny ...
LngJhnAg
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4 posted 1999-09-08 01:27 PM


Foxy Granny? Lovey is a granny? Say it ain't so, Lovey. I loved your poem. Are you looking up?
Iloveit
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5 posted 1999-09-08 01:32 PM


yep I am, a granny, and looking up, my friend, I still remember
Sue
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6 posted 1999-09-08 03:44 PM


Iloveit, I love it. I'm a (step)granny, too.
HugsTeam
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7 posted 1999-09-08 03:58 PM


Iloveit

Couldn't resist this...You and me both sweetheart!

HUSG

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An angel looking up

traveler
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since 1999-08-17
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8 posted 1999-09-08 04:00 PM


SMILE ... and how do i get there from here ... hmm .. thank you, really enjoyed the read
Iloveit
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9 posted 1999-09-08 04:11 PM


thanks all, and hugs team, you know the place you hold in my heart, and hugs go both ways

big big hugs back

traveller, it just takes time, of course a lot of friends, and a lot of hugs helps

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