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Shimmer
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since 1999-09-07
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0 posted 1999-09-07 11:49 PM


Every look drags you lower
Til depths of sadness are reached
And the pain of the dagger
Leaves your maind helpless and bleached

Sweet water calms the sorrows
As it rushes through the veins
For it flows towards tomorrow
Washing away the pain

A hollowness is your shelter
For it has stolen what you preached
And darkness appears nearer
While you tumble to the beach

Sweet water gives us comfort
Cleanses with tender rain
Guides us to the right port
Where hope is what we gain

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Great men are they who see that spiritual is stronger than any material force, that thoughts rule the world

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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-09-07 11:54 PM


Very nice, Shimmer.
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