Open Poetry #2 |
Stolen away... |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Stolen away and there inspired While seeing dreams during the day, All saw me sleeping, so they say, But no one said that I looked tired Due to the fact that in the day The dreams were floating in my sight I cannot sleep; awake I stay And like a lonesome shadow sway Over my sleeping friends at night Note: this is a translation of a poem by Tsvetaeva. ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling [This message has been edited by Master (edited 09-08-99).] [This message has been edited by Master (edited 09-08-99).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks for sharing this! It's great! ------------------ Denise |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I'm glad you liked it Denise. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew. So much more to learn... Thanks for sharing! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I too enjoyed this Master...very thought provoking..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
There's always something to learn Sunshine, thank you for responding. I'm glad you liked it Pepper. ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Hmmm..Still pondering..Goon one Master.. ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I had to read it a couple of times to let it soak in, but I finally say....Wow! Very beautiful & moving ! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Translating a poem is very dificult this was a good job. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks everybody. I wasn't sure about translating at first, it seemed too challenging. But it the end, translating turned out to be fun. |
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