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loverbaby
Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 15
Sioux City Iowa

0 posted 1999-09-07 10:02 PM


Time passes and keeps on passing
today slowly but surely fades to yesterday
and yet another sun is sure to set
another star sure to fall
and yet another moon sure to shine through
the window of the man that stole my heart.
and as this time passes i sit in this empty room
watching, waiting,
for yet another star to fall so that i may make another wish
that tomorrow will come sooner
and i will be one lonely sun set away from kissing you.
so it is to this i say
time passes and keeps on passing

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PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
1 posted 1999-09-07 10:09 PM


Very sad in its way and touching too. You leave a measure of hope. Very piognant!

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-07 10:28 PM


Ditto!

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Denise

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