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Lost At Sea |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Roaring waves inside the wind... Crashing in my mind again... Lost at sea without a float... Ill without an anecdote... Shipwrecked now, and all alone... Not even sighs or aching moans... The silence is so hard to bear... Can’t hear one sound- not anywhere... Stinging smoke burning my eyes... Can’t stand the silence- miss the lies... Raging winds across the froth... Hanging me upon a cross... Throwing me ‘bout- to and fro... I have no other place to go... Breaking me from limb to limb... Can’t let myself to think of him... He makes me weak- I must be strong... Though I’ve been out here way too long... I’ve lost all hope- won’t find a sail... No reason now to whine or wail... Just let me fall and suffocate... Won’t matter now... it’s way too late... Just let me drown beneath the waves... No use trying- I can't be saved... ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." [This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 09-02-99).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Are you OK?! This is so sad. Written beautifully, but terribly sad. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
theres not land in sight one so pray over the next horizon ok buddy |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you Walt and Severn... yes, I'm ok.. I'm tough... grrr!!! see? hehehe  Thanks for caring though... I appreciate it...------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You know we're here anytime. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thanks... you are truly a friend... ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Very, very sad. We are all here for you. ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thanks, Dream. I know you always will be. ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Very escalating poem. There's always hope, and you have the ability to save yourself, just look beyond the pain, and reach out to your friends who will always be there through all your trials and tribulations. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is an extreamly sad, but also beautifully written poem. Remember, beyond the horizen, there is land in sight. May you find a peaceful island where you can heal. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
one voice~ When you can write like this,how can it be hopeless? |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Ah... my trials and tribulations don't seem so bad now that I see I have all you netpoets supporting me! Thanks, sincerely, to each and every one of you....------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
These kind of times are tough....I know I have my own. I'm just digging around the archives tonight. Hoping all is well. Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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