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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I’ve wandered life’s myriad paths, meandering down every trail. I’ve seen the sights and heard the laughs. All that came before you seems pale. You are the destination towards which all my travels lead, the flame my imagination and words desperately need. Your love is the road beneath my feet, leading ever to your heart. Your passion makes me complete and has right from the start. Where my journey does end is also where you and I begin, forever and always I will stay by your side and seek to win your heart with the rhyme I spin from the gossamer fiber of winding desire until the end of time. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
wow, just love the way you write, |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
enchanting... ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice...you should write free verse more often ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Really, really nice DreamEvil. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Very beautiful. I bet your wife loved you all the more for penning this in her honor and name. Well done, gallant sir. Alicat [This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 09-07-99).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Dream this was beautiful! You certainly have a way with words! You certainly do have a passion and can clearly explain both sides! Very well done, I loved it!!!  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you much, 'tis a piece I did for a Lady near and dear to my heart. My wife received her verse privately. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Has anyone ever pointed out the contradiction that you are my friend? Truly breathing beauty with one breath, while the next exudes bitter hatred. I envy the yin-yang of your talent! |
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Crimson Rogue Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 21 |
I can't help but pondering how relevant this piece is to my persona. Well done. ------------------ ~A rose would not be worth the name without it's thorns~ |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Dream, I think this poem is absolutely beautiful! I love it! Thank you for posting it...------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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