i worte this a few years ago and it got published and i got publisher of the year.

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Open Poetry #2

i worte this a few years ago and it got published and i got publisher of the year.

Jeff Smith
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since 1999-09-07

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0 posted 1999-09-07 01:00 AM

~~~~~~~~~Remembering you~~~~~~~~~~
As I walk through the fields and see the flowers I think of you and your nice warm smile.

As the moonlight shines down on the lake
it reminds me of the pretty glow from your face when I kissed you.

I laid there watching you sleep at night
admiring your nice soft hair.

I know I make you mad and upset,I never meant to cause you any pain I just want to make things right before you walk out of my life for good.

Well you're gone and I'm here all alone
with only my memories of you,
Sometimes I just lay there thinking of you
and all the things we used to do.

Every once and a while I catch myself
smelling your pillow and your nice sent.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

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1 posted 1999-09-08 12:09 PM

Very romantic and wistful and sad.
Say how does someone get published anyway?

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Denise

rogen of the night
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since 1999-09-07

Posts 29

2 posted 1999-09-08 02:51 AM

Thank you dsnyder for the reply I hope everyone likes it.

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The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without.
~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~

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Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-09-08 07:54 AM

I like this,very sad though

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-09-08 10:42 AM

Romantic and sad. I liked it! Thanks!

rogen of the night
Junior Member

since 1999-09-07

Posts 29

5 posted 1999-09-09 01:41 AM

Thanks everyone,I wrote it after me and my girlfriend split up.

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The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without.
~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~

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