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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
awake to the ruin the decay of age and rise to the sound of lives full of regret has it driven you insane yet give it time our essence will make you blind but hold on for hope then we can elope sleep once again full of sin but at least alive in a lover's eye.. ------------------ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Your writings are very deep and full of emotion using as few words as possible. Very good choice of words!  ------------------ Denise |
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