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Remember Me
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Remember Me |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
(A dedication to my mom who has always been there for me.) Remember me when your down n' out. Stuck at home - ready to shout. On Saturday night feelin' lonely, Eating a sandwich made of baloney. Remember me when your heart's in-two. Our times together - I know are too few. Recall our time when life was fair, when children were young and little to care. Remember me when the memories flood, Knowing I will always be your blood. For I am made just like you, my mommy to you - I am forever due. Remember me when life makes you mad, It wasn't long ago n' things weren't so bad. I made you laugh till you cried, holding your belly and suddenly sighed. Remember me in your final hour, Sweet lil' me who always bought you a flower. It's with you I long to be, so close your eyes and Remember Me. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh, very dear and sweet!! Teary eyed, I am!! That was beautiful!!  Thank You!! Jusbleu ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Here's a tissue for you... Justbleu ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Very nice tribute to your mother...I know I always find it hard to say how much I care for my mother...this is a perfect way to express those feelings. Beautifully done poem. Also let me welcome you to the forums. I look forward to more of your work. Star ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Thank you Starith. I really like your statement on your profile. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
Being a mother can be hard. but by your poem i think your mom has done a great job with you. thank you for opening your heart to us. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
What a sweet sentiment. Thank all of you, for giving me a place to share. |
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