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Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-09-06 01:51 AM


Silence

Lost and confused

Wondrous and hopeful

Spring is early

Walking in the sun

Not without a clue

An effect which makes one unsure

Never questioning why

Running

Laughing

Letting my dreams go free

It will be a miracle

If they come back to me



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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-08 08:07 PM


Very descriptive of lonliness and disappointment. Very emotional. I enjoyed reading this.

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Denise

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-15 06:36 PM


Thanks again!!
Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-09-15 07:14 PM


We have to let them go, Justbleu, and sometimes one or two will return. Not often but it happens. Keep the faith>
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 1999-09-15 07:16 PM


That's true!!!

Thanks

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

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