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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Heartbroken You came to me like the sun You were there for me I don't want you to go Why do you have to leave Going away to where you came from Far away from me I want you to stay here But, you can't You have to leave Leaving me alone In my crazy little world ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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Tyke Junior Member
since 1999-08-22
Posts 26Calgary, Alberta, Canada |
A very nice piece to read. I enjoyed it very much but remember it is he who is poor indeed that can or will promise nothing. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Again, well done justbleu...Boy, you are writing poetry after poetry about that special person aren't you?? GOOD LUCK..  ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful..it tore at my heart strings. Isis |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Justbleu [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-19-99).] |
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