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Star Fairy Junior Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 39cerritos, ca, usa |
You took this situation as a dammed confirmation of your fearful sensations and you already felt ready to let go but reason to leave, you didn't know now you can use this finally go You taking all your fears and making them true Why you hurt so bad, you have no clue Because it will never matter that I was in love with you Now you can pack your emotional baggas and go away You may physically leave my sight but in my heart you will stay forever and eternity, until my final dying day I understand you need to leave I know you can't stand the sight of me In my dreams and fantasies we will forever be So take your fears and run away but remember this last thing I say My heart's eyes on you will never stray. 090199 ------------------ 823 |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
This is a good poem but title wise the only thing I can think of is something like the "Eyes of My Heart". I wish I could be more helpful. ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
How about 'Love's Agony' or 'Not Meant To Be'? or maybe 'I'll Miss You'?  ------------------ Denise |
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