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Open Poetry #2

Wonder of it all

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-04 08:14 PM

to let you go
it will kill me i know
but your better off
to let you shine
never mine
such hopes we had
wishing on that star
it reaches so far
like the glint in her eyes
i never saw
the wonder of it all
and shes better without me
fogging up the view
which i hope she
shares with someone bright
someone new

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Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

1 posted 1999-09-04 08:16 PM

Hey, I'm bording on obbsession here, so you had better just quit writing so good before you have a groupie on your hands. lol

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-04 09:09 PM

beautifully stated but incredibly sad

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-09-04 09:13 PM

Definitely a poem to make one think. How many of us, knowing we are holding one back, are willing to let them go to reach their full potential? We tame horses, don't we?

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