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Music Box |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
The music box landed on the wooden floor bounced twice them bounced no more opened up and the ballerina did dance I was in a trance memories flood and im drowning in the past the music plays i remember far better days she was dancing in the wind i thought our happiness never could end but everything that begins must also end so i sit here silent music box on the uncaring floor and tears still flow to gather more ------------------ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
wow, I like this. You always seem to lure the reader in during the poem, and then hook 'em at the very end. Good job. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely one indeed! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully written. I really enjoyed this one. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The image and the mood you create is excellent. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is divine...I enjoyed it.  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful..I enjoyed this. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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