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Life, Love and Stars in the Eyes
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Life, Love and Stars in the Eyes |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
At the end of the day Looking down on life Wonderng "what love is"j Seeing it in the blue and black Seeing it in the stars Deep within the eyes With upward turned eyes When it is no more day Looking in between the stars Searching through life Answers hidden in the black Telling all about love How is it that we see love With our four eyes Up in that murky black Hidden by the light of day Hidden like life Only in the stars So what say the stars On matters of love On matters of llife Deep within the eyes That I long for every day In that inviting blue and black In that blue and black I see the stars In the night or in the day I see that wich I love In your eyes I see my life With you in my life Alone against the black Alone within your eyes Writen in the stars Is my love Forever and a day |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
You know I love this...exellent, exellent work. As I've said before, you have awesome talent.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Your poem reminds me of Twilight, that brief time between night and day!!! I enjoyed it!! Justbleu ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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