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My garden of the mind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My garden of the Mind She would leave my garden. My castle of charms illusions. Roam in catacombs time. Rub noses with the mundane day. Stay pasture with the flock. Bruise upon the rocks of chaos. The impede could not plant, Seeds of comparison enough, To nullify her need. Love could not build walls high enough, To contain her freedom. Nor could it waylay or stop time. Times ravage continues And I wished to veil the mirrors Empathies her beauty Surround her with a web of grace Cherish her with embrace But all the strings martyred wrong for Love rings a double bong. Loving must honor each instruct Yet within us all, lays destruct. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 09-04-99).] |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
Seymour. I am really getting a double bong from your last two lines and either one seems correct. "Within us all lies"...(as in LAIN) or "Within us all lies"... (as in LIED) Oh what a dilemma I am in. [This message has been edited by Wolfgang (edited 09-04-99).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully done ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wolfgang, Don't we all slip when we lie? Made correction. thanks for the read and correct. I understand your delemma. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 09-04-99).] |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
Ah shucks Seymour! You solved the problem for me. Now what am I going to do for the rest of the day? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wolfgang, Well you can do what I do. Sometimes I shift to painting although I haven't done much of that lately. Hoot, Thanks for the read and comment. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and I missed the whole thing...  I Went and laid down on the job again!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved this one |
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