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fazewon
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 8
Houston, Tx, USA

0 posted 1999-09-29 06:14 PM


thousands of pictures and thoughts
coming together like a collage
it's up to me to sort them out
piece them together and figure them out
discard the ones frightful to my nature
animal insticts remember love thy neighbor
try to follow the laws which govern my mind
but even this place is home to beasts
who feed on fear and attachments
planting seeds in the subconscious
fertilized and nourished by outside distractions
growing feeding distorting thought transactions
driving me to the brink of insanity
everything's fine on the outside
but mentally I've gently
been beaten to death

Fazewon

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-29 09:13 PM


Very deep and well written

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-29 09:37 PM


Very well done.

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Denise

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