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The Coronation
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The Coronation |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
The Coronation Late summer will spread its resplendent canopy, the sun's rays lasering a prismatic display igniting nuances of color in each tree, mind-boggling sated eyes, Fall beauty has its day! Crimson reds and russets, yellow gold from the churn, azure blue of the sky, orange fire soon to burn, chlorophyll emeralds, different shades of brown, so dazzling a melange, is autumn's brief renown. Beautiful, her last days, more lovely in some ways than the Spring's explosion of new life; she conveys dignity's awareness of a cycle that's blessed, abundant, prosperous, regaling before rest. Hosannah, Deity, this grandiose largesse yearning eyes lived to see, Fall's multicolored dress, for the sun whose brilliance highlights a gaudy scene, for Mother Nature's coronation of her queen! --H. Arlequin . . . . Poems From the Goober Tree http://nathoo.wustl.edu/goober_tree.htm |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
This is beautiful!! I'll never look at Autumn the same way again! ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
dp APPLAUDS! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This has the deep, romantic posture of "old poetry...", the kind that lived before us, and lives on. Very well done, Sir. My thanks. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
As beautiful as the season itself! My favorite time of year!  ------------------ Denise |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Very nice poem it has good use of imagery. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
H., may I say that this is breathtaking! You paint a very pretty picture here ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
tx wildchild, doreen, sunshine, denise, sd and caroline for the kind words and the gift of your time in making them, smooooooooches all!! HA |
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