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Refuse to breath
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Refuse to breath |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
peer over the ledge you hestitate wanting this peace to last always upon the balcony you gather courage close your eyes so deep yet you can not leap because there is something itching scratching screeching its hopes dying scream fading dim but you dont have to you really dont the problems dont cease because you refuse to breath life is problems revolving falling some things make it worth the pain learn that now see it later and save that ledge for fates razor edge ------------------ |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
when i read your poetry, it seems like i already know the rhythm of what you are writing. it's truly incredible, as is your talent |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow....this poem says a lot in very few words...excellent craftsmanship |
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