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Eternal Kiss (Challenge) |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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Eternal Kiss I want to make love to you… show you what words cannot express. Reveal my vulnerable side, emotions no longer reigned in. I want to own you, the way you own me. I need to possess you body, mind and soul. Let’s take this connection to the next level, Beyond the physical to the spiritual. Our skin gets in the way, Preventing me from getting As close as I need. I want to feel our souls touching connecting merging into one. Make love to me, Slow, sweet love. Let every touch, every sound Be an expression of our devotion, Pure in motive. Look at me, See me! My essence is ready for your discovery. I can see myself in your eyes, They tell me I am beautiful, adored. The light in your eyes brings tears to mine. If I close my eyes I can feel your caress, even though you have yet to touch me. An out of body experience, I watch our souls as they embrace in eternal kiss. ****** This is in response to a challenge on making love. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
You have done well with this challenge, Tara. The depiction is breathtaking. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Wow, great poem, I definitely have the opinion that making love is much different than simply having sex, and you have captured the esscence of it here. Not that I'm all that knowlegeable in this area.  ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Tara, in your words I can feel your feelings, understand your longing, acknowledge the deeep longing and desires you feel. Sensual, torrid, yet a little uneasy as well.....lets see where this is going....shall we? ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful! Especially the bit about getting rid of skin. Well done, Tara. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Beautiful expression of making love! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
a beautiful and vivid description of longing and desire for that perfect sexual mate. I know those feelings all too well. Thanks for giving them a voice. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Tara, a wonderful poem well done, especially loved ......Our skin gets in the way, Preventing me from getting As close as I need. I want to feel our souls touching connecting merging into one.  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tara, You have touched me without touching me. Well done. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
often I have marveled at the power of a kiss, between two lovers, and you have captured it beautifully, great job! I love the way you open yourself totally and find acceptance and love....sigh [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-29-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
gorgeous Tara....sigh ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tara....a beautiful expression |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Exquisite and sweet, Tara, Wonderfully done. ------------------ Michael Anderson May Darkness find you all through the day. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thanks guys. I love how a great conversation with a friend can inspire me! ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
OMG! Tara, you've created a lovely definition and explanation of a kiss that is eternally true and divine...  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Perfection, Tara. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Making love is so very special and you portrayed that beautifully here!! Well Done!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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